Talk:Rosalina/@comment-36530255-20190325205537/@comment-36530255-20190325215257

What I am saying is the entity doesn't appear to be attacking them for any reason. I am not saying your story is bad, becuase I have done the same thing multiple times. I'm just doing a bit of a reveiw. I'm not saying you should change your story either. This story doesn't seem to be cliché and is very interesting. Thats why I said it has potential :-)