User blog:Revaeropium/Is anyone going to read this? I'm publishing it anyway.

Ok, I'm being brutally honest here, but Batwing4 Beckons Me isn't really one of my favourite pastas on this wiki. Here's my list for my favourite pastas on this wiki: 1. Artiopas Series 2. Exception 3. We Have Her I(I know it's not technically a completely Minecraft pasta, but oh well) I know lots of people on the wiki (and a few outside) really enjoy Batwing4 Beckons Me. However, I don't really enjoy it. Don't get me wrong, I respect Green as a user and an author, it's just that I don't really enjoy this pasta. I've heard of people who think that someone who hates something they've done means they completely hate them. It's not like that. So let's start. Firstly, there's way too many parts. The first four were moderately long, which is fine, but from the fifth part, it just started to get really short. Most parts from then on out were about two to four paragraphs. That's really short. I'm a pretty slow typer, and takes me about ten minutes to write that much, twenty to write it. Secondly, for me the plot is extremely confusing. I think the plot's about Makoto/Batwing4 getting possessed by some nationium entity and then getting killed by an electrical wire. Then he gathered all the creepypastas and forced them to work for him except Null (feminine) who somehow managed to escape. Then Sean (or whatever he's called) sees him and then he organises a battle and is somehow able to persuade all the famous playsers with amazing PvP to help him, and they STILL lost. Then they had a whole bunch of battles and it turns out that Batwing4 was being possessed and then after Batwing/'ShadowShard' (best name ever) was defeated they were transported to a dimension where it never happened but it could happen again. Then came the most overused plot twist ever which was that this never happned it was was written by Batwing4 himself. That's all I remember and I won't check over it because it took me half an hour to finish it.

Lastly, this series is much too stretched out. There are 21 main parts of the series, PLUS several backstories and a part from another point of view to top it all off. After reading about a dozen parts, I started to get bored because it felt like the story was being dragged on and on when there were so many opportunities to finish the series and tie up all loose ends.

TL;DR: B4BW, in my opinion, is overstretched and confusing.