Talk:Hacker Zackall/@comment-30319843-20190420194513

I liked this alot, especially the part where you flew over the land and crashed into the castle (xD). The part where you searched up a hacker database was innovative. I will read the next part in this.

I think you should some improvements  in descriptive writing (I’m not saying I didn’t understand what you were trying to describe), other than that, this is neat.

Score: 7.5/10