Thread:Bella1963/@comment-32555140-20180627012913/@comment-33719196-20180627033206

Not to bad, however, I have to critique that your plot is very somber. Happiness has it's place in a horror story and you need a good mix of happiness, joy, and enthusiasm with somber, grief, and fear. You want to have the reader come out from reading your story to think that the story can be emotional, fun to read, and is creepy in a way. so far, a 7.5/10