Thread:MinecraftPastaWriter/@comment-44948193-20200211081310/@comment-36621215-20200211120950

It's not the worst thing I've seen. It's fairly creepy, especially with the whole doll scheme. The only problem I'd say I have with this story is that it's not long enough, the pictures are way too big, and it's paragraphed or split weirdly. Other than that, pretty good!