Talk:First story/@comment-37314709-20190608181802

6/10

Pretty good for a First pasta! But I gave it a six because…

1. Profanity

Ok, the wiki has nothing about restricting profanity but try to put less f-words in pastas.

2. pretty cliché tbh

The entity attacks you for no reason, you can't leave the server, the person never wanting to play MC again. Again, pretty cliché.

here's a list of Clichés you might wanna check out.

3. the last paragraph

ok, *chuckles*. No one ever does that! plus I think you can only follow a page, not the user.

Next time, if you want feedback, there is a template for that reason, it is called RfC. type this* in the source editor if you want feedback.


 * { { RfC } } (But without spaces)