Talk:The Chronicles of Minecraft/@comment-34979284-20180627154020

I see that you're really creative, and you've put a lot of work into your creepypasta. Although you put other creepypastas into yours, I still think you did well with expressing each character's feelings and personalities. What bothers me a little bit is the grammar and spelling, but it is readable, and you actually know how to use paragraphs! You've done a really good job on your FIRST creepypasta. I have to give it a 8/10!