Thread:Chicken54/@comment-28940399-20161223034712

the feedback i am recieving on herobrine:the true terror begins is that the story is terrible and cringy.i am starting to wonder why my story is considered bad and cringy.a guy commented saying that youtubers are making my story cringy.the thing is this:if i shouldn't have youtubers in this story then why did mojang decide to have youtubers in minecraft:story mode?,anyway here is bassically what i want.i want to know what makes this story considered bad and cringy and if so why are the bad/cringy things so story ruining and also how can i improve the story. 