Board Thread:Writing Workshop/@comment-32555800-20181025135805/@comment-33719196-20181026131205

Revaeropium wrote: BlueHeart7693 wrote: Reva, Its incredible, just one thing: Generally, the way I see it is that All the main characters get picked off one by one in the final chapters. But I really enjoyed reading this and maybe extend it until a good 15 chapters. In this final skirmish between you and your general, I wanna see some action, but don't have the general beat you. Also, about the RCCW being terminated, on the actual interne, I am their Bureaucrat, maybe let my character battle the barbs? Idk

But these are just a few suggestions if you wanna make this story into an actual page. 1. The general is FROM my country and is sent over to Bellabefore it gets seized. The way I wrote it was pretty vague but I was easily able to interpret it the way it should've been.

2. In this world the RCCW is a completely separate entity and people who have positions here are unaffiliated with the RCCW.

3. It isn't finished yet. I see, but my suggestions are gonna be on when it becomes an actual page