Talk:The Moss Cave/@comment-38808443-20190904153440

I like this, though there are some grammar errors, and there could be a bit more description

for example:Some wolves killed few sheep so carl took wool but then some scary music started playing, It was not a Minecraft music, But he made a bed and slept but some man with moss skin came at him grinning and the day started and he disappeared, Carl just continued his objective, He was having hallucinations so he took bit rest but it was too disturbing which prevented him, Carl somehow in real-life fall asleep and saw dreams that he have found cave in real life and then getting killed,

You could write: Some sheep got killed by wolves and Carl  grabbed the wool. After all he could finally make a bed.But what he didn't see was a figure with a moss skin charging at him before dissapearing. Carl didn't notice and continued his journey. HE thought he had disturbing hallucinations, so it prevented him to sleep. Carl in real life fell asleep too. His dreams, were horrible. He found a cave and then, got killed.

Hope I helped somehow!