Thread:OrangeGamerYTMC/@comment-36530255-20200114233938

Your story may get marked for deletion for the terrible grammar, which is against our qaulity standards. Making a story and posting it on a public site means it needs to be readable. Please add periods at the end of your sentances and capitalize words properly, especially when using the 'i' statement. With good grammar, comes a more enjoyable story. I suggest you try and fix it soon, or it will be removed. With its decent length, the story does have potential, and you must have put quite a bit of time into it. 