Talk:The Stranger/@comment-36530255-20181116191618

I fixed some grammatical errors. The story is pretty good, but there is only one problem I have with this. Most of the sighting are almost the same. The screaming, all the players present being killed in a rather boring way...(what I mean is you just say The Stranger killed them instead of describing what happened to the player which makes the story boring). Still, this story has a nice concept and a good length.

Score: 6.9/10