Board Thread:Writing Workshop/@comment-32555800-20181025135805/@comment-32555800-20181026132750

BlueHeart7693 wrote: Revaeropium wrote:

BlueHeart7693 wrote: Reva, Its incredible, just one thing: Generally, the way I see it is that All the main characters get picked off one by one in the final chapters. But I really enjoyed reading this and maybe extend it until a good 15 chapters. In this final skirmish between you and your general, I wanna see some action, but don't have the general beat you. Also, about the RCCW being terminated, on the actual interne, I am their Bureaucrat, maybe let my character battle the barbs? Idk

But these are just a few suggestions if you wanna make this story into an actual page. 1. The general is FROM my country and is sent over to Bellabefore it gets seized. The way I wrote it was pretty vague but I was easily able to interpret it the way it should've been.

2. In this world the RCCW is a completely separate entity and people who have positions here are unaffiliated with the RCCW.

3. It isn't finished yet. I see, but my suggestions are gonna be on when it becomes an actual page Sorry, but no. I've already planned out the next few parts and I'm not willing to change what I already have.