Talk:Batwing4 Beckons Me: 2018 Remake/@comment-37030351-20181112014926

Well, it is quite nice, but just not creepy enough. The creepiness needs more work.

Btw, your story progresses way too fast. And please don't reveal the truth yet. It will be much more scarier if the main character knows nothing about Batwing4, and he needs to discover the truth befoe the ending. You should have brought in some sense of mystery.

Yeah, all I can say.