Talk:RB 37/@comment-32555800-20190326193034

Plot: 3/10. Now, I'm not one to judge, but this is essentially the plot of every other Minecraft creepypasta out there. I'm being generous here because you probably have a lot less experience in writing Minecraft creepypastas.

Originality: 3/10. I've seen everything in this pasta before.

Language: 4/10. This score would have changed if I knew how good you were with English. Even though I went with the benefit of the doubt, it's not hard to improve.

(Original) Grammar: 5/10. Again, this score would've changed if I knew you were a native English speaker or not, but I went in the middle because I don't know.

Overall: 15/50. If I assume that this is your first pasta, and you're not a native English speaker, then this is pretty good.

Main Tip: Read more Minecraft creepypastas and try and find something not done before.