Talk:Shadow of Unknown:The Phantom House/@comment-35373506-20161231194743

A great story... however I have noticed in all of your stories there is weird spacing (or none!) between punucation. example:

Hello.You look nice.

​is ment to be

Hello. You look nice,

Just something ive found. That aside,

9/10

this has such good graphics, very visual (even when I dont want it rto be :P) and it has a creative storyline. This is actually the first story in the series ive read so far so I will be excited to read the whole thing. Justs needs grammar work and needs to be finished. :)