Talk:Green Steve/@comment-31953669-20171128164703

The writer has lots of potential, but they could improve in a few places.

The largest issue with this writing is the pacing. It feels too fast for most of the story. There is very little description for most of the story. It kinda feels like the writer did it all in one sitting.

Second, it's full of grammatical errors. Editting is one of the most important parts of writing a story, and this story could have used more.

Finally, I would have enjoyed something more original. Think about it. This story is about a non-player entity that looks like steve, but with a slight difference. It shows up in single-player worlds where it messes with the game and leaves cryptic, threatening messages. This story is very similar to Herobrine in more than one way.

I hope that the writer sees this comment and impliments my reccomendations. I'm excited to see them grow as a writer.