Talk:Frost Girl/@comment-33430270-20190205212430

god this story sucked. theres lots of possibilities for good minecraft creepypastas, so why do almost all of them suck? firstly, i think you shouldve mentioned that you were eve at the start of the story (doesnt really add much to the suckage tho), secondly, the build up is meh. i think it could've gone into a little more detail on how it seduced maxxy boy over there. thirdly, why do these characters talk like badly done silent hill characters? in silent hill it made you feel uneased, but in here its just bad. and why would max print out skype convos? i dont know a single person who would do that. plus its a waste of ink. also, the ending is plain bad. should've stopped at "i never saw him again", i feel it would've made this frost girl much more ominous. im not very good at ratings, but ill try anyway: 3.6/10