Board Thread:Writing Workshop/@comment-32555800-20181025135805/@comment-33719196-20181025220054

Reva, Its incredible, just one thing: Don't kill your character after only 9 chapters of the whole thing. Generally, the way I see it is that All the main characters get picked off one by one in the final chapters. But I really enjoyed reading this and maybe extend it until a good 15 chapters.

But these are just a few suggestions if you wanna make this story into an actual page.