Talk:Mind Hero/@comment-34979284-20180415190854

It's amazing. There are a decent amount of paragraphs, which I really like, since a lot of people create pastas where there are no paragraphs and all the sentences would be smushed together. This part is a smooth continuation of the last one. I like the fact that you don't ONLY concentrate on in-game possibilities, for example: "And when his feet were sore and bloodied and blisters he collapsed in front of the palace before him."

You can't bleed in Minecraft. You there's no such thing as a palace full of monks in Minecraft. You make everything more exiting for the readers. The movements of the hero are so realistic... and everything. You don't only use simple words for example, "want". Instead you use "desire". The story is long; it took me like 4 minutes to read. This is probably 1 of my favourite series. I'm sad that not many people check this out. You deserve more attention. I give it a 10/10.