Talk:5011/@comment-36530255-20190107040025

The story is pretty good, though many Minecraft Creepypastas have this problem, including yours: A quick pace. Most stories seem to start out with, "I was playing Minecraft when all of the sudden this happned." It doesn't set a creepy mood without suspense, therefor making the story not-so-scary. As for the grammar, I found a few errors and fixed them, no big deal. Overall, this does make a fine MC creepypasta. I just want to know who 5011 is, becuase there doesn't seem to be a motive given for the entity, like many other pastas that lack in charecter depth.

Overall score: 5/10