Talk:Dsf.exe/@comment-31556419-20190920101403

This pasta has been eaten (fully read) by me. I will proceed to rate it now.

Cliché counter: 0/7 (Perfect!)

Originality rating: 11/10 (One of a kind!)

Creepiness: 8/10 (Chilling)

Realistic: 6/10 (Pretty realistic)

Randomness: 0/5 (Sweet!)

Structure: 11/10 (Reading this is like slicing a hot knife through butter.)

Length: 2/5 (Average)

Detail amount: 15

Detail use: 6/6 (I can picture this quite easily!)

Overall: 7/10

How to improve: Maybe make the entity appear or something. And provide actual screenshots of the game while it's happening.