Talk:Cannot Defy Death/@comment-36530255-20190608153827

This is actually pretty decent, there were a few grammar errors, but that doesn't really matter in this case. The story is very unique, evolving real life elements that were somewhat realistic. Still, its a bit far fetched how the charecter got the idea the rocks had to do with the mysterious Minecraft world. Also how does the villain know this specific user is going to be playing its world? Well, it could be something supernatural, now that I think about it. I can see the story isn't finished yet, so I'll give it a 6/10 for now. I'm very impressed how far you've gotten with it unlike my first story on this wiki, with no clichés in sight!