Talk:The tale of the Glitch/@comment-37030351-20181112015253

Nice piece for your first pasta.

Anyways, I think the story can be more well-developed. The creepiness is fine, and you should add more details when you first come into the server.

Btw, can you split in more paragraphs? Some are way too long, and they just feel like a wall of text. Please don't.