Talk:The Faceless Man (Creepypasta Edition)/@comment-36530255-20181025191622

I have not read this yet, but I can tell there is some problems with the formatting, try and spilt the story into more paragraphs, and have the charecter dialogue separated in thier own lines. It will make it easier for users to read and enjoy your story :D

Okay, I'm going to read it now :P