Talk:Tim/@comment-36530255-20181206155018

Grammar: 30% (I only found a few errors so it doesn't matter)

Plot: 40% (nothing I saw with it, seems pretty original)

Charecters: 20% (they didn't really stand out to me, just another villain and anonymous charecter who details the story through thier perspective, I suppose that doesn't matter though)

Clichés: -5 (blood, stereotypical suicide...it truly doesn't really ruin the story, but it doesn't really make it creepy enough)

Creepiness: 5+ (meh, it was still pretty freaky)

Final Score: 90%