Thread:Finalcutter55/@comment-34369352-20181122141229/@comment-34369352-20181122152116

Finalcutter55 wrote: Thank you. Also, is there any plot mistakes or places my plot can improve/I can fix?
 * 1) Can't really give opinions on how to improve characters. My only point that I have on Rose is that she's like Lollipop in a way or two.
 * 2) You're not ruining Artiopas. If anything, you've made it better. Artiopas actually devolved into trash before you helped me with the seventh entry. You saved Artiopas, you didn't ruin it at all!
 * 3) I don't see any mistakes in Apprehnorra, not one.