Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-30319843-20180219122801/@comment-26318250-20180219202545

Bella1963 wrote: Prism55Writes wrote: Bella1963 wrote: Prism55Writes wrote: Bella1963 wrote: Prism55Writes wrote: Welp, that didn't work. Bella just walked off.

"303, are you sure that Bella and Clementine aren't a threat?" Green Steve asked.

"Indeed," 303 replied.

Herobrine shook his head: "They are powerful, even if we got some of their powers. We shouldn't underestimate them, not the Wikivengers."

303 thought for a second, before nodding: "Okay. Now, it's time to take over the Human World..."

Entity 303 waited for a few seconds, before saying 3 words:

"Asbof Asbof Asbof"

Clementine and I actually still have our full power, but Entity 303 was brainwashed by the author to think that they had a part of our powers.

Well... that's certainly interesting... ''But... that isn't what happened in the story...?''

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_ex_machina I don't think it is exactly this, but it is close.

''Plus, extreme Mary Sues usually make stories uninteresting. What is the point of a plot when everything can be removed/reverted/fixed with the flick of a wrist?''

''But, it is a community story, so, whatever. Lets continue.'' Yes, Clementine is a Mary Sue, so is Bella1963.

But they are only allowed to use half their powers. Even with half their powers, they are grossly OP. 

I am not trying to insult you, but Mary Sues usually make stories pretty boring.

Anyways, back to the story! Ok, fine.

They are gonna become an observer after the fight. ''Not neccesary, just make them less OP. Not to insult you or anything, but just to make the story more fun in general. You can have abilities (aka magic spells, teleportation etc), but freezing cities and stuff like that is very overpowered.''