Thread:ElectroAaronDYnamix/@comment-30319843-20180128192710

Greetings!

So, you must have noticed that 'Lunar' was written with a good story and decent grammar, except that you kinda rushed at some points. Since this story is in the Suggested Reading category, I think you should consider expanding it a bit, and add some proper titles and stuff.

This is just a suggestion, so yeah, the decision is in your hands!

Peace out!

I am H950sm, and I walk amongst the shadows as a seeker of the truth. H950sm (talk) 19:27, January 28, 2018 (UTC) 