Thread:Finalcutter55/@comment-34369352-20181122141229/@comment-35439862-20181122160428

Bella&#039;s Sword wrote: Really? Overpowered useless characters (Bella1963), grammar errors, sentences I could’ve rephrased better, and so much more.

Again, I see no mistakes. None of your characters are overpowered, there are next to no grammar errors at all in that story, you phrased your sentences fairly strong and no other mistakes are present in that story.

We did great. Just ask anybody else, and they'll agree with me.