Talk:Typo/@comment-38808443-20191017141417

Hmm, it's actually not bad. THe grammar is actually quite well. But I think it's a bit weird, when you explain his description, it was hard to tell if this was happening in real life or in the game. The story itself I feel is kinda cliche(but that's how everyone's first story is), it's very similar to Herobrine, and when a player joins and has a weird entity/hacker with hi, yeah...

But, it's not bad, I defenitly adha, dddddiiididi, nooot get cringma.

8.5/10