User blog comment:Revaeropium/Is anyone going to read this? I'm publishing it anyway./@comment-26318250-20170922194106

Interesting opinion. I will just try to reply here.

1. I might be playing the devil's advocate here, but I actually kind of agree with this. There could be less parts to the series, and if Green really wanted to have 21 parts + backstories, he could've made them longer.

Another thing is, currently, getting through the series involves lots of clicking between parts, having to find them through the mass of other pastas (because there is no link to the next part at the end of any other parts), and in fact, more time is spent on clicking through than actually reading the pastas.

This, of course, will change when Green finishes the Full Series Collection. However, for now, it is hard to read the entire pasta.

2. This is partially true, but mostly not (IMO). I also spent a few minutes thinking about what the actual plot is. It is very twisting, and pretty well made. I have to give Green the credit for planning the entire thing.

I only spent the few minutes thinking about certain parts of the story. For the majority of time, I understood it perfectly. I guess it depends. I found it pretty simple to understand, some might not. It definitely could be simpler, however it also could be much more twisting and weird.

3. I also slightly agree here. After the first 10 parts, I also expected the series to end, as pretty much everything was answered. It was pretty surprising then, to find out that Green had over 11 more installments planned. I felt like Green got slightly inspired by the Ienai series by Name Plays, to carry on.

I did enjoy the extra parts, however I also expected the story to end after part 10. Pretty much everything was finished: Batwing died, Well Wisher visited, everyone happy. The other parts felt like a slightly lower-quality sequel to a good movie.

For the extra side stories, some of them are necessary for the original series (1-10). The ones that are necessary for the rest are similar to the rest: like a lower-quality sequel.

This, in no way, means that I hate the series, or that I hate Green and his works. It's simply constructive criticism. B4BM is definitely better than a large part of the pastas here. However, there are better pastas and series on this wiki, too.

I do NOT hate Green, and neither does Revaeropium. Also, this is not any kind of "treason" (insulting a staff member). This is just constructive criticism, as I said before. It is here to help Green, not to put him down. I like B4BM as a whole because it is pretty creative and well-written (IMO). Despite this, there are a few mistakes, minor and major.

That is what I think.

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19:41, September 22, 2017 (UTC)