Talk:Solitute/@comment-39066666-20190521225647

Maybe fix the grammar errors, and then more people would like it more. Like, lone I's should be capital, and usually after the comma at the end of a word there is a space. In the second sentence, it says "I are". This should be corrected to "I am". In the fourth, it says "the scary forest i appeared". This needs to be corrected into "the scary forest I appeared in." You basically just let the last word hang. The second-to-last one says "something observes me into this vast world" I see why you made the mistake, you were probably thinking "something observes into this vast world" and maybe skipped/forgot about the me. Also you said "if i die them ill". You made three grammar mistakes, first one is the lone I, which I already talked about, second is that you made a typo while spelling "then" because instead of that, you spelled "them". This happens to me a lot, mainly because the M is so close to the N on the keyboard. Now, third grammar error is "ill" I know you meant I'll, but you forgot the capital I and the apostrophe (which is just ' ). If it is just ill, then it means you are sick, (as in "I fell ill from sickness"). Well, just correct these errors and it would be better! I think it's a great article too, so keep up the good work!