Thread:EliRedPikachu/@comment-35781439-20190701134010/@comment-32555800-20190702071804

definitely 'inspired' and doesn't have anything blatantly ripped off

'[Second Kingdom of Frostralis] ''

Second Lucretian Empire] 

[Holy Empire of Mortesius] 

[Greater Republic of Celestiux]

[New Montuarian Imperium] 

[United Empire of Sancterrium]

these names are very original, defo not taken straight from an older pasta

Just for our sanity, please, please, please, think of some names and ideas of your own instead of basically ripping off of our ideas. I've read your factionpasta and it feels and looks like a blatant knockoff. I'd very strongly advise you to think for yourself instead of taking straight from a more popular pasta.

Plus I feel pretty pissed since Deadlock and I spent an hour brainstorming the nation names and who does what (seriously, most characters are who they are and do what they do in our pastas for a reason) and you just randomly take content from our pastas and put them in there.

One more thing, the lack of originality makes me feel like this is just tagging along with our pasta. Find your own style of writing rather than piggybacking off of someone else's ideas and style. For example, I rather liked Frown's factionpasta (his greater multiverse not included) because it wasn't a duplicate of our pastas - it was written in his style of writing. How much you like his work is subjective and irrelevant, but personally, I think it worked well and it was original so it gets approval from me.