Talk:The Villainger/@comment-30957835-20170107211019

7/10. A good story, very gruesome, good imagery. I have a few negative opinions.

- Having protagonists shrug things of as 'glitches' or 'coincidences' has became a bit of a cliché in a lot of pastas.

- Having altered skins of mobs/players isn't neccasarily scary on it's own. If there was more detail, or a build up, then it would have more of an effect.

- I can tolerate players finding you in real life, but mobs? It crosses a line with me.

Keep in mind this is just my personal opinion, and the story is still well written, if only for some small grammar mistakes.