Talk:Error: Steveglitch/@comment-36310878-20190124092335

My only complaints are that it's a little too "Five Nights at Freddy's" style, "weird mods" are a cliche and the creepypata messing up the player's device is also a cliche, however I think you used both of these cliches in a way that made it acceptable. This story was very interesting, and actually quite good. I loved the way you made the character discover mods, that was really clever. This is really good for a first pasta. I can't wait to see what you write next!