Talk:Entity 303/@comment-5785744-20140830031641

This sounds like a cool addition to the stories of Herobrine. I would love another story about 303 and how maybe some specific characters from the Herobrine stories join teams to fight him, working with the one who was haunting them. That'd be pretty cool. I liked the idea in all as a story, but to be believeable, just no ._. also I saw some mistakes here and there, like "the most scariest" during the second encounter. but still pretty good to me.