Thread:DomIsTheBest/@comment-33281568-20170907102855/@comment-26318250-20170907190409

DomIsTheBest wrote: Ill never make a creepypasta again porblem solved No! Don't do that!

I left a review on your pasta with the intent to HELP. It contains tips you can use to improve yourself and your writing. Don't give up, you WILL get better.