Talk:The Danger of The Caves/@comment-38613501-20200201090540

This is pretty bad with continuity.

''I turned around and a huge screechy noise echoed around me. Standing in front of me stood of me was a red figure with the white eyes I saw earlier.''

Mike states when he's only' heard''' of the entity. Also there's a missing quotation mark in Mike's story. I can't be bothered to read the rest of this though, not to my likings.