Talk:Enderbrine/@comment-24.99.151.27-20141217184428

1. Don't say that the creepypasta is fake (It ruins the feels)

2. Make it more eerie than gory

3. Use more original concepts (I knew Enderbrine was fake the moment I saw the name, it is actually a little silly)

4. Use better pronouns

Other than that, a decent creepypasta 7/10