Talk:Solar/@comment-26323958-20180419145052

The story is magnificent and it makes me interested of what is next.

However... one thing that peeked me

Is it just me or when I read the line... "His parents left him alone at approximately 12:30AM to go grocery shopping..." and "They arrived at 3:00PM to the sickening site of their son’s body. Mr. Lawson..."

Is it supposed to be 12:30 PM or is it really 12:30 AM?

Nevertheless, great job.