Talk:ZCREAM/@comment-33176737-20191211195242

Review:

Grammar and Spelling: Quite a few errors here. Lacked multiple periods and spaces between words. I corrected most of it, but there was some parts I couldn't fix at all. 4/10

Story and Plot: Was hard to follow and I found it rushed, to say the least. One second you were here and the next you were wherever-the-hell. You had never met 'ZCREAM' before and thus had no reason to know his name. The concept of the bloodied zombie was interesting, but in my opinion you butchered it. 4/10

Creepiness and Language: Felt no real emotion or description throughout the pasta, both from the story and the author. Words were repeated multiple times and unnecessary strings of words were also commonly used. 3/10

Final rating: 4/10