Talk:NAMENOTFOUND.303/@comment-32659957-20181216042002

I may be a bit rusty on the rules, but, uh... Pretty sure that you can't say pastas are real. If you yourself believe that this story actually happened, then you posted this in the wrong place.

Anywho.

The narrator's point of view is all over the place. At first, it looks like you're looking back at the aforementioned events; then you switch to entries in a journal. Could be confuzzling.