Talk:Alone In The Dark/@comment-29854599-20160910191005

This story is pretty good! I would give it a 7/10. The ending was also sweet, how it said "Alone in the Dark". Some suggestions could be to make the story "slower", where you build up the suspense and then execute the action. You don't have to do this though. Anyways, this was overall a great story!

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