Talk:The Return of Enderbrine/@comment-24.99.151.27-20141220170414

Great plot, and it has the perfect balance between gore and eerienes. Maybe next time they could to be in a kill to live scenario? Good grammar overall but maybe you should refer to your avatar simply as me or I. I like how you included ZexyZek, as I said before, using real charcters can also help increase the believability therefore increasing its creepyiness, and for people who don't like knowing it is fake you could put a spoiler alert? Good adjectives and word choice. * * * */5 (4/5 stars).