Talk:LDS6 changed... pt.1/@comment-36530255-20181122041937

"I was beggining to collect some wood but then, a zombie that doesn't burn in the sunlight."

There is a lot of sentances which are awkwardly phrased and don't make any sense. There are also some incorrect tenses and spelling errors. I fix some of them, but try and improve your grammar so people are able to understand and enjoy your story.