Talk:Eric The TNT Creeper/@comment-39715158-20190606042051

Wow... I'm Jason but I don't know who you are. Anyway, I will do what you asked nicely to do.

For me, Unlike Deadlock, I do not go easy even though it is your first one.

Characters: 6/10. If you are writing put more emotions.

Storyline: 4/10. For me, this story has no planning. Try to plan before you write. Though It is pretty fun.

Total: 5/10