Talk:The Story of the Secret Watcher/@comment-30957835-20170106154150

Mmph. 5/10. It could have been an interesting concept, but I find myself realizing it's much too similar to Null or Entity 303. A random player or glitch that ended up being a force of evil.

Some other discerpancies will be listed.

- We aren't told the consequence of his existence.

- I don't believe you can change your name, unless you hack the game, that is.

- It's fairly abrupt, and little detail is given.

- For a short story, it doesn't really have a kick to make it exciting.

Do not take this as me hating this story or you, I merely wish to give criticism.