Talk:Herobrine: The True Terror Begins (Fan-made)/@comment-28940399-20161202045033

PLEASE READ

please don't post any comments telling me to hurry up and finish the story,i am really trying to take my time and i am trying to get as much done as possible.can you all please go easy on me with the criticism?,this is my first creepypasta and first ever work on fiction so i don't know how to make it good.here are some questions i have for you all:

1.Can you change article names?,if so which of these names are the best:

Herobrine 2 Herobrine returns Herobrine:a terrifying tale Herobrine:hell nightmare

2.what makes this creepypasta bad?

3.how is this creepypasta cringy?

4.why shouldn't youtubers be in this story?,they were in minecraft story mode.