Talk:The Corrupted being or glitch/@comment-33176737-20191216222037

Review:

Grammar and Spelling: Noticeable errors, mainly with spacing and punctuation. Paragraphs are also NOT BULLET POINTS. 6/10

Story and Plot: Is there a story or plot? It felt more like an email to Mojang about some error rather than a fictional, 'creepy' story. While I do admire the concept in the theory that someone could take it and make it better, it really didn't work for you in this 'story'. 3/10

Creepiness and Language: I'm absolutely SPOOKED. Nothing in it that could be considered creepy, language is foundation level... Repetition as well. 2/10

Notes: Shameless bit of self advertisment there as well...

Final Rating: 3/10