Talk:The Cursed Server/@comment-38808443-20191230065140

This is meh. The plot is going WAY too fast. And the server part I feel was a cover up. You ran out of ideas so you made up this server, which is supposedly 'haunted' I recommend giving more description and details, and not rushing with the story. Also the whole, server part really runs the pasta overall...

4.5/10

Never seen a lot of pastas take place in a monument before... so that's a plus!