Talk:Enderbrine/@comment-96.50.66.146-20141219013725/@comment-24.99.151.27-20141219032709

Thank you for accepting my apology, it means alot. When I saw your comment: "Note from author of Creepypasta: Okay, I'm sorry for not properly doing this Creepypasta, but it's just my way, okay? There WILL be a sequel to this that will be a bit more darker and less gory, so I hope you're all happy about that," I felt guilty because you looked mad and upset, and I realized I should of made a list of things I did like. Here it is, sorry it is a little late.

1: It strayed from the cliche "stalker/builder" stories

2: It was very suspensful

3: It had a good hook

4: Has the feel of mystery good pastas have (Who is Enderbrine?,  What are his intentions?)

5: Few grammar mistakes