Talk:KingHacker/@comment-34979284-20180724124808

This pasta has a LOT of cliches.

Also, the grammar wasn't the best.

ALSO ALSO, the name "KING HACKER" isn't that creative.

ALSO ALSO ALSO, if you want to make a fake tutorial about this hacker, and want to make it at least a little bit believable, then DON'T STEAL other people's works (Entity 303, Null, Herobrine...) and put their hard work in your pasta. You actually can do it, but you did something else: You basically told the story of Entity 303, except Entity 303 is now King Hacker...

I'm not saying that this pasta is bad. I'm just saying that you could improve. Don't take this TOO seriously.

4/10