Talk:Batwing4 Beckons Me (3) The War of The Living and The Dead/@comment-26318250-20170716070510

Interesting continuation. I liked how this one was much more action packed than the rest (IMO). However, I got a few questions:

1. How did they take out a large army of Glitches out all alone? I assume from the story and based on how long it took (2 hours) that the army was huge. How did they take down the entire thing alone? Sure, they might be powerful, but the Glitch army still got a huge number advantage.

2. Related to the last point, did nobody call the police? I mean, it IS a huge army of weird glitches trying to kill a boy and three other strange creatures. Did nobody think of calling the cops, or was that simply not important enough to be mentioned.

3. I find the relationship between Null and Sean funny but a bit weird. I mean, it IS a boy and a video game glitch girl that is pitch black...

4. I found the Notch/Herobrine battle a bit too fast. It was described using just one sentence, " They shot seemingly thousands of lasers at each other until Herobrine finally managed to pull through one last laser to win." I would have liked it more if it was expanded on more, but it is your story and your decisions.

You got me hooked and excited for the next part. I hope it comes out soon. Good luck!