Talk:A creepy experience/@comment-36310878-20181030094051

Well, I fixed some grammar/spelling issues, but in general: Well... there's a hole here; "I felt "weird" and I felt like I should make some protection for me otherwise the weird being may start hurting me like it did to the llama. I started making preparations for my base." It never mentions a being though until now so uh...

Aside that: Idk what to rate this really. But I'd say it's okay for a first attempt.