Mini Steve

Hey there! I woke up to play Minecraft online with random players. I joined a server named 'YoYoYo'. I walked around finding trees so I can build basic shelter. A few minutes later I had a house, pickaxe, sword, and an ax. I saw a noob coming toward my house. His skin was Steve.

"Get away, Noob!" I shouted.

"I'm really pro. You don't know what you are talking about." Steve spoke.

Soon enough Steve was in front of my door. I came out when I saw Steve that was half a block width and 1 full block tall.

"You! How are you so small? Are you the Legendary Mini Steve?" I asked so surprisedly.

"Finally. Thank god you are not calling me noob anymore." Mini Steve said. "And yes, I am the one and only Legendary Mini Steve."

"OMG! How are you even in this world? I heard that Mini Steve can only enter one world. If you are here, that means you are from this world?!" I shouted scared out of my mind because Mini Steve can hack you if you are in his world.

"I am. Please say MESOPRO." He spoke looking directly in my eyes. He could feel that I was terrified.

"MESOPRO," I said.

3 seconds after I said MESOPRO, I turned into Steve. NOOB STEVE. I lost all my worlds and lost everything. I had to buy Minecraft again and make a new account. The next day I went to see if that was a dream but unfortunately, it wasn't. Since then, I had quit Minecraft and started to play Crafting and Building.

Even though I had quit Minecraft, I knew Mini Steve is hacking other poor players. And that is haunting my dreams forever.

Thank you so much for reading my second fake story in Minecraft. If you like this story, be sure to read my first story, Eric The TNT Creeper. Thank you again.

Please review how my story is in your opinion and characters and storyline base out of 10.

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