Talk:Entity 500 fourth encounter/@comment-37030351-20181129142936/@comment-37030351-20181130082643

I read them all. This whole series is like, extremely unsatisfactory.

It is boring, plain and, to me, it sounds like a seventh-grade work. Not to mention that this series is extremely short, with like, only 412 words? Seriously, even if you put all the episodes together in one page, this pasta is still a very short one. At least you need a 1000 word before you can call it a somewhat story with content.

And, the thing is, the story doesn't make sense! "Entity 500 is here, his mission is to destroy Mojang, and he is starting be taking minecraft itself." What? Why is it Entity 500? Where does his name come from? Why does he want to take over Minecraft? Nothing. Also, take a look at your style of writing. Please don't write like "what does this guy want???". Putting out question marks like these made me feel like this is written by an immature kid.

These might be harsh criticisms, but I do think you need to improve them. This is not good.