Talk:Headless Steve/@comment-36769867-20190725085927

i added a few words to give the writting more sense feel free to change it back or improve it more it´s your writting take it where you like!

where story could go: it could be taken to a many chapter pasta as i see it

detail: lack alot of detail 3/10

creativity: 2/10 it´s difficult to make a creative Steve pasta which is why the storyline is important

storyline: 2/10 doesn´t really have one to short needs to have more detail each incounter should be a chapter or at least a two sentences

overall i can see it having sucess just needs some work :)